Great starter, really interesting. interesting way of introducing the characters and hope to read more soon.

update soon. it sounds like there is gonna be a lot of drama!

wow, love it...
just don't make Crystal the third party...

and the way you described Derek, it's really _ *eyes widened*

well, hope to read more "_"

Interesting start. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

haha Derek made me laugh. Update soon! :D