I remember writing a poem about having the wings of a bird and what I would do, but this trumps mine any day. ;)

I love your poetry. It's simple, yet full of emotion and depth.

Keep it up!

Beautiful! The emotions in here are excellent. I like "I'd reach to taste the bluest sky."

Oh, by the way, I don't know if this was a spelling mistake or just a typo, but you wrote "grandure" instead of "grandeur".