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LostInMe 2009-06-16 . chapter 1
A very nice poem. This is a lovely way to describe lies (not that lies are lovely - your choice of words is).

"My lips are married to lies" - Excellent beginning to draw the reader in!

"Is my mouth a strange cauldron,
where only poison gathers?" - Very well put!
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