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Naoya-kun 2009-07-24 . chapter 1
hmm...reading the prologue again. I don't think it's Evan..It sounds like someone from her past. Is it Carson? That's who I'm thinking..maybe he wasn't dead under that sheet hm?
Naoya-kun 2009-07-24 . chapter 3
I loved this, and the first one. I'm just hoping that it isn't Evan that betrayed them x.x that would be bad. Cause I so like him, more than Carson really. Evan and Mia just seem to fit more you know? And it kinda seemed liked he really did care more about her than just a friend in the first one. He was always worried. And when they had that stand off in the kitchen.. I don't know, they just..work. haha. So yea, I hope we can see more of them.
Tipsy101 2009-06-22 . chapter 3
I really like this, has me hooked already.
Tipsy101 2009-06-16 . chapter 1
Good beginning!
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