LOL! It's really very amusing! Great job on this one! I want some tortillas now... XD

Ha! I loved this story/play. It was very amusing and witty, while at the same time spreading the word of God. The ending also really tied the story together and, while you didn't describe the scenery, I could really picture myself in a homey kitchen surrounded by good smells. Very nice job!

Lol this is so funny! The whole 'Sunday is my favourite day' thing, and then the reveal that they'd already made pancakes... well, I had to laugh! Good job!

Wow, um, pancakes with PB&J, and hummus. I'm going to have to try that tomorrow!

Little miracles like getting cornmeal to make tortillas 5 minutes before the 'special tortilla making time' are what makes life worth it. Having to live with 3 guys with funny Scadanavian names is probably a perk too.

Very nice! Silly stories like this are usually flamboyant and overdone, and you managed to make this funny without making the characters stupid and hyper. That's very difficult. :)

*applause*