Aw, that was really cute!

Bahah(:

This was adorable

Aww! :)

simple plot and yet the reader will feel fluffy inside. :) good job!

Before I get to the review, I have to say: my favorite line is "Billy was trying to see clearly through the rain." because it reminds me of the song. You know, "I can see clearly now the rain has gone . . ." Yeah . . . Only I would notice that.

Okay, on with the review.

So I liked the story. It was sweet. I just have one critique: there are several places where I think you needed commas that you kind of just avoided them. That was my only problem. Other than that, I liked the last line. It was a good ending.

AW! THAT WAS SO SO CUTE! D

that. was. really. CUTE. Hahaha damn I wish I had one of these encounters when I used to take the bus.. no fair :(

Aw this was really cute. I love their awkwardness, although some of her (unspoken) comments were a bit superfluous. Again, though, this was really cute, and I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:

I loved this! I'm glad he stayed with her and even kissed her on the cheek! Adorable :)

Aw! This is so cute! Love it!

Cute. I like it. I would vary your sentence structure some though, because the constant short sentences gives the story a choppy feel.

:) K

This was definitely cute. I especially liked the end. Bah, I'm such a sentimental person. Oh well lol

Great job!

Mia

I sure like bus stories. This was very cute.

That ending was absolutely adorable.

aw how cute )