I really like this. (And I'm not just saying that because I know you.) YOu should update soon.

Wow, wow, wow. This was phenomenal! The voice of Chris was so clear, it felt like someone was actually talking. I could hear the pauses and emotions in his voice. I really liked the way that one thought flowed to the other, and even though all of the sentences weren't necessarily "full sentences", the fragmented statements made it very realisitic.

There wasn't a lot of plot in this, not a lot of backstory, but again I liked that a lot. It was concise. Even though it wasn't the traditional narrative/short story, it had a gradual beginning, middle, and end.

Usually when I read things, I'm subconsciously waiting for it to be over already. But as I was reading this, I was conciously disappointed when it ended. I love your writing style, and hope you post some more. bravo!