seriously, this is off to a great start.
it's one of those stories where I want to skip to the end to know how they get themselves out the fucking mess (or if they don't D:)
Riah and Adria have nice depth and their personallities work well together.
The summery makes the story seem hm...i don't know how to phrase it...shallower? than it is?

Countinue on please :D

each part of your prologue is like, longer than each one of my chapters. your prologue is just about the length of my entire story. lmao.
at any rate, i like it lots and lots and lots.

I'm dying to find out more about a cult that lives in the city, lets some of its kids go to school, and allows the girls to dress provocatively (I know there are such cults, I'm not challenging you: I'm honestly dying to know more about them).

And Diane . . . why did she not come looking for her husband? There's a question . . .

I like it so far.

and I think it's the longest prologue I've ever read. ^^

Aw! It's so cute! I really hope you were going for cute because other wise I just insulted you on accident.