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Reviews For: Taking Down the Cards
Marie Bee 2009-06-23 . chapter 1
Wow I liked that alot I can relate.
You have talents
Isca 2009-06-19 . chapter 1
"Another person that I've lost." It's funny how that works. I too keep little keepsakes, like cards, and often look at them to remind me of the 'happier' moments. It's sad that things have to change. "I was the one who destroyed my happiness." That's very introspective. Keep up the good work hun. :)
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile 2009-06-17 . chapter 1
Yeah, it happens though. People grow apart, so it's not ALWAYS your fault:)
I really like the idea of the poem. Even if it was inspired by something simple, it's really original and fresh. The last line was awesome:)
Hollis Winter-Summers 2009-06-17 . chapter 1
I loved this one! Ya, you realize how many friends you lose from the time you're little to the time your a teenager. I remember in elementry school, everyone was friends with everyone, and starting high school next year, we've got our seperate cliques and gangs and groups and whatnot...Sorry, I rambled.

Great poem! =D
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