|Reviews for Better Than You|
| Cojaka 6/27/09 . chapter 1
There is obviously a huge story behind this one. I can only say: wow. The imagery and internal rhyme is wonderful. The meter creates a very strong sense of rhythm. That rhythm channels the tone extremely well.
A dramatic monologue with no intended audience. Of course it remains in a way ironic that the note was crumpled and cast away, but the words have been passed on. Still, it makes the reader yearn to understand all that brought this situation about. Great work.