It's so sad, but wonderful at the same time.

I almost don't like it, because I feel like I'm enjoying someone else's pain.

I like the way it is written, and the way it reveals so much, yet, nothing.

"i left without you on.

and now,

now i'm so gone."

A favorite of mine.

oh...so sad. you really expressed the emotions in your words. great descriptions; i especially loved:

"it was a door.

a crack ajar.

just waiting. just waiting,

for someone to open it fully.

no one did."

it sounds so lonely and plaintive. and beautifully worded. :)

bye,

-Sunny-

P.S. if you have time, i'd be quite thankful if you could review a poem of mine. thanx.