sounded pretty lyrical. and the italics, they're nice.

flow of the piece is really excellent, and jesus christ, I think I'm in love with your writing.

Argh I am filled with envy.

and have you noticed, when good-looking (or vain people, that too) pass by reflective surfaces, they always turn their heads and look?

Wow just breath taking!

Great job!

that was flawlessly written, i applaud you.

beautifulbeautifulbeautiful. :)

it reminds me ..