That was hilarious! I felt like I could really relate with the father. Imagine being the only man in the house with a wife and a daughter and a pregnancy test. It was really cute and well written. ^_^

Keep it up~ I'll look for more from you.

-CS.

well its different i think i'd faint if i found out my mum was pregnant now lol and i did not see that coming! lol

kat x

I know you want to enter it in a short story lit mag, but I think that if you expanded it, gave it more emotion, made it lest quick and abrupt, it could definitely be improved. Interesting twist at the end. A few rewrites and you could make a good story a great story!