Oh goodness, I'm sure Mia would much rather known about Tessa's prognosis than be rejected by her best friend and then having that friend die shortly after. I understand what Tessa was doing but I don't think it was the best option.
Please update again soon :)

I really hope someone had walked into the room to catch her and that it wasn't Cedric - he doesn't look well enough to cope with getting out of bed and catching someone - it'll take ages for him to get better afterwards.
Please update soon :)

Lovely xx Really nice xx

This was fantastic, if I can say that. You really put her thoughts into the story well and the descriptions were fabulous. It was a really goods plot choose to, never would have thought about that! There are some spelling errors, and confusion with the dilogue, but nothing majorly important.

Cedric sounds so cute! Just decribe him to me, I love the character personality you chose for him, but you make him appear cool, and unreachable in the beginning, then he gets nervous and scared, just be careful to keep his character in check, thats' one of the hardest things to do in a story.

Update soon, you're doing a wonderful job!

It was so nice of him to visit her, he seems like such a great guy

Oh goodness, I really hope there is something they can do to help her. I don't understand why her family would put her through all the pain of chemo if there was no chance of her getting better.
Can't wait to read more - please update soon :)

This is so good! Please continue