Good chapter. Look forward to reading more ]

Man, that's a lot of hostility. I wonder how they're even suppose to get along.

Kind of mean of him to look down on her, because of her clothes. Are they (meaning the clothes) really that bad?

Any way, enjoyed this chapter, hope you update soon.

I just love stories that start off with the "I hate you" realtionship but then gradually turn into something more!

I loved their bickering and can't wait to see many more arguments between the two!

So he calls her a peasant just becuase of the way she dresses but she actually is from a wealthy family becuase of her grandfather right?

Fantastic update!

-Liz

Good chapter! I would love to see him suffer some more abuse for being such an ass, and yes, your tenses are much better this time, good job!

-Stephanie

Iabsolutely positively LOVED this the beginning was really funny, loved the whole "I'm breathing my last breath" part in the letter. She threw a shoe at him, hilarious. But he did deserve it :) I'm dieing to read the next chapter!

this is pretty good... its getting interesting...

Well this story is certainly off to a good start. I like it. However, there are a few gramatical erros and you may want to watch your tenses a bit closer. Also, I noticed that at one point it said that she had black hair, but later it was stated that she was a brunette, brown hair. Just pointing out a few things to make the story smoother. Good job so far.

-Stephanie

Yay! And the shoe comes in! hahaha! I'm so happy they finally meet again after all these years.

Can't wait to see what happens!

Update soon please!

awee cute please hurry with more! :)

:o That was very rude of him to say to her! If I were her I would have thrown both shoes at him, one at the back of him and the other once he turned around. and maybe I would add in a slap across the face...maybe...

I'm really liking this story! :D

-Liz

ahaha i love lexia - shes awesome

& derek is so arrogant i can see them going head to head constantly! :D which will be fun fun!

keep it up xx

I really like this story a lot so far! Keep writing it! hope to see you update!

I usually HATE historical fiction, I think it's pretty boring stuff that I do not need to know, that I can't relate to. But I LOVE this! LOVE LOVE LOVE! :)

I love lexia! She just so happy and cheerful.

haha loved it, loving it. i really like this era and you've kept with the language etc yay!

keep it up & update soon, really really eager to found out what happens next xx