definitely a humorous story! :)

Looveed it! :D

Hahaha, adorable ] I love how you did both their POVs!

Hilarious and adorable! I couldn't stop smiling ]

Ha, I loved this. :) However, one of the lines here was messed up from Delaney's point of view.

I think I see what you mean by error- at the very beginning, when we were looking at the nameplate? Maybe it was something else...that I missed...it was late when I read the first chapter, alright? But besides that it looked good...

Personally, I think I liked Delaney's POV better. It was funnier. :D But Drake's was still good...:)

GOOD JOB!

FlyingThroughDreams

Haha! This was AWESOME! I laughed the whole time. Great job. It was OOBER funny...loved it! Gosh, have I said that already? Whatever. Great job. I LOVE this Delaney girl. She's awesome.

Now- I must go read your next chapter! Excuse me...

FlyingThroughDreams

:) i love it, it's so funy!

pleaassee write more!

"Then I realized from his red vest that he worked here. I squinted and read his silver name tag. Drake."

AHH! Sorry about this. But there. You said that in the part that's Drake's POV. So you should change that.

"She spun around, and her hazel orbs meet mine."

Also, there. It shouldn't be meet. It should be met. :P I hope that helps!

Oh, and sorry, I haven't been following your stories for a while. I was gone on vaca, ya know? Summer :D But yeah! I like this one -

Hey :) I liked it. The only thing is when he's working it switches to her POV for a couple of sentances and is a little confusing.

Keep writing,

Gup

hehe very funny

hahaha! the mannequin thing was hilarious!:)

Aww, That's Adorable. AGAIN!I'm in LOVE with your lovely stories. How do you get your ideas?

Btw, Yes I did just send you a review for your other story and you're welcome.

HAH

i think it would be funny if you added more chapters to this. i think this is hilarious.

Very cute :)

Keep writing,

Gup