ah...too bad this is all your gonna post... it's very interesting!

Really interesting start and I can't wait to read more. As for a title, the one right now is good, iot's hard for a reader to suggest another considering we don't know where this story is heading. Please update again soon!

If I'm not mistaken, wasn't this story on your lj? From what I remember, it was interesting. :)

awesome beginning. I look forward to reading more!

I remember reading this on one other website. I loved it then, and I still love it now. Hope it gets accepted! I'd buy it in a heartbeat.

YOU ARE SO MEAN! I want to read the rest of this now. XO It's really interesting, and I just want to read the inner conflict Mair has trying to balance his sidhe and goblin...Plus I have a thing for mute characters. I will vigilantly watch for you to post when this story is published!

I remember reading this story ages ago. I loved it. I hope it gets published.

This seems interesting.

Oh thank God you're back!
I really like this plot line so far.
And I can easily picture the sidhe after your other story, but I can't remember what your description for goblins is, so this new character is a bit hard to picture.
I keep just accidentally imagining David Bowie as Jared the goblin king in the Labyrinth.
Can't wait for this to be published!
Okay, off to ShadowFire to buy your book.
*frolics merrily*
And, just because I feel obligated to offer some lame title or another, maybe something like The Half-breed's Throne or something of the sort?
Meh.
Much love and eternal fangirl-ish devotion,
Sara Maxine