This is awesome stuff! Update this one! D

they have an interesting relatonship... good story btw! :)

This one is definitely my favorite so far (hey everybody loves a ninja right?)i totally love Nathan he's hilarious

ahaha Nathan's a jerk but i like him. he makes me laugh

I missed this story!

So glad you posted!

That was a cute chapter. I hope they work things out...

I do agree with Madison though...a Justin Beiber hair cut? What was he thinking!

Please update soon!

I missed these two too. Wonderful. Love the incorperation of techology and how their little bits at some points were almost poetic. At least Maddie's bits. :) I find myself wanted to know about this sleeze and why she forgave Nate so quickly.

Funny. Short... But funny! :)

Hm, not my favorite, but still funny.

Aw, I love it. :)

Ha, that was great. :) But how did Nate get his arm around her when he's behind her? Did he move, or something? In, like, a split second?

He should be scared of Hannah Montana! DUH! ;)

Ha ha ha. Very cute li'l story. I like Nate and Maddie. By the way, in the A/N before the last chapter, you said that the girl's name was Madeline, but before that, it was Madison, this left me a little cinfused, also in that chapter, you used the word "Their" when it was supposed to be "there". Just pointing that out.

This story is really cute, and I don't mind that the chapters are short. I think that you describe their personalities really well, and that makes it more fun to read when they finally realize that they like each other.

CUTTE!

greaatt chappteerr! i love the characters! you're doing really well! keep up the great work!