I'm really repeating myself but this poem is amazing.

Wow. You have tremendous talent.

Another haunting poem. My fave lines:

A consuming hunger compels Them now

"A seeded force that rules all

What to-do during the day

We are quiet as need be

We will wait for your fall

We do what We must do

We will stalk as predators do

Concealed, you cannot see Us now

We will wait for your fall

All for one, one for all

What a twisted world this be

We will be invisible by day"

Oh my God, this poem stole my breath, and ripped my heart out of my chest. This poem was well-written, vivid, stunning, and poetic. Wow. Just wow.

wow...so true!

i really like it:)

Once again, beautiful.

You write in a way that makes me feel everything you are writing about. It's very sensual.

Great job.

Your writing is very beautiful.

It's emotionally fueled, yet concise; realistic.

You know how to describe a situation in a way that appeals to nearly all of the senses instead of just one.

I loved this. The issues you write about, the way you write about them. It really struck a chord with me.

I can't wait for the next update.

Okay, that seriously was awesome. Good transitions, going from the beautiful to the not-so-beautiful, and revealing the truth...Fantastic.

...Is some of this Latin?

It was good, I like how you told a story...

I didn't quite get this one as well...but it was good, certainly. Intriguing...

You're a good poet.

Wings

Oh, God...

I was suicidal for a while and the last time I tried to kill myself was through strangulation...it's so true...I felt like I was dying again...

That was perfect. Jeez. How did you do that?

Wow.

Wings