“You might want to duck and cover,” I advise her.

“Why's that?”

“Fee is in fairy tale wedding mode.”

“...Oh for the love of-”

“Yeah.”

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I am so tempted to kidnap this story. :3

'Colbie Caillat kind of makes me want to go kill some hookers.'

xD Poor Colbie. Another great chapter. STOP MAKING ME LAUGH SO HARD. >> I could barely eat my freshly baked confections. Thats the last time I bake and use a laptop at the same time..

Like the others, this was an entertaining chapter. I look forward to seeing where the story goes. Also, I thought it was interesting the way you are handling Fee and Tim's relationship through James's eyes. Excellent Waldorf and Statler reference, by the way.

"Colbie Caillat kind of makes me want to go kill some hookers."

HAHAHA! I love it! This story is so incredibly witty & down to earth. Also, I'm starting to fall in love with theater because of Glee (I'm such a bandwagoner, I know!). So all in all, I love this story. You have a great style. Can't wait to read more! =)

That was a hilarious chapter, especially when the 16-year-old Lori dissed the theatre group's musical. I can't wait for the next chapter. Is the next chapter going to be when Victoria comes to see the musical?

i hope james luck will be better for his next date

I have been enjoying your story. The Apostle's Creed of Lame was hilarious. The way you have been handling the character of Tim has been rather interesting. I like how you have portrayed a character that clearly loves someone but is still an unpleasant character to others in the story, as this is something many of us have seen in our own lives. I look forward to seeing where the story takes James with regards to Victoria and Lori. Also, I share your protagonist’s pet peeve for text messages that do not use proper spelling and particularly enjoyed that.

I really like this story so far. James and Beck are just such likable characters. And I really like Fee and wish she wasn't marrying such a jerk. I

I hope you update soon--I can't wait to see where this goes.

I realy like this story...especially the last part of the third chapter...really funny!!
update, update!

Also, my ex-bf's name is Tim and he was a total ' raging **tart jackhole'. So I can relate to his emotions.
Just thought I'd add that in my review. (:

Hahaha.
This made me laugh out loud on numerous occasions, even when I didn't quite catch all of the theatre jokes. (:
I relate a lot to Beck, when I was in my confirmation classes. And I relate a lot to her uncle now though.
Anyway, it was cute and very fun. Great story.
More, right??

It's been a long time since I've read a story about a fellow thespian and because of that, I can relate to James pretty well. I swear on the bottle of Gatorade in the kitchen fridge that I am James' twin sister. But then again, I suppose theatre geeks are just supposed to have some sort of weird mental connection with others of our kind :]

But on with the review. First of all, I love how your characters are so fleshed out and life-like. Even though Beck and I are totally unalike, I somehow manage to find myself adoring her to little bits and pieces. Moving on, I really can't find anything wrong with your story, thus far. It's creative and hilarious and I love it and I'mma shut up now.

Write more, and hopefully soon!

Great story so far. I love your 3-D characters. Keep up the good work, and hope for an update soon!

I still just really can't get over how much I love James. I'd really like to find out more about Tim. So far it seems as though Fee deserves someone better, but I guess i should get to know him better before I decide that. This chapter brought back memories of catechism class.

I love James and Beck's relationship, and I love their relationship with Fee. I can't really tell if this is a romance between James and Fee, or James and Victoria, though. I hope it's the former, actually, because I really think they'd be cute together and they have good chemistry. I wasn't really a fan of all the church stuff in this chapter, mostly because I'm just not into it and I don't know all the lingo they used, but overall, this chapter was pretty good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Please put it out soon! :D

:3 Sweet-Aurette, Can you update more often?

James is such a horny guy XD It makes me giggle. I like Beck. Finally, a younger character who can fend for herself. I think James would starve without her...Or get bored easily.

Now.. As always, I shall end by saying..





EARTHEN FAERIE WANTS MORE STORY!

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