I belive I like "As the Days Go By" the most. I'm depressed right now and the poem connects with me and I connect with it. Your poems use uncommon words...I LOVE THAT! I never hear anyone say "void". You remind me of me when I wrote poems. PLEASE keep writing.



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This reminds me of the Phantom of the Opera and his love for music. Although, his instrument of choice is exclusively organs, he had a violin. Oh, look at me, talking like I know the guy.

Great poem! Love the repetition.

Amazing, just amazing. This really helped me see how important the violin was to the speaker and how they expressed their feelings using it.

I can totally relate to this poem, sometime men are beautiful but untrustworthy. I love this poem good job, keep it up!

This was sad but in a good way XD...what I mean is this poem got an emotional effect from this. This was a good poem and somethimes after breaking up or leaving their partner they feel like this.

Ah, you may have inspired me to get my violin out again and relive my past passions...

As always, beautifully written.

~ Sakina x

I liked the way you portrayed how connected she was to the instrument, even if it was just a violin. Great set of poems dear :)

This one is deep but feisty, I have compared women to roses but never men, it is an interesting poem. All and all great.

You really show the emotion of sadness well. I am sorry if you have felt these things personally. But your writing is amazing.

The beginnig is lovely, the way you painted the scene of a simple dawn/dusk sky, was lovely.

The middle sounded like the husband committed suicide, I may have interpreted wrong?

It was all in all a lovely poem, and I were speaking to this person, I would tell her that she only has one life and as long as she keeps a place for her deceased love in her heart, then it is alright to move on.

That was beautifully written, I am known to leave incredibly long reviews, but since this is poetry, there isn't much to say. I think you portrayed the woman's self-guilt, and the well she yearns for her loss lover amazingly. Not much else to say, but good job.

Your description is well-done and you send the imagery and point clearly.


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Aww, this is so sad! I went went through something similar...

Good job!

I really liked this one, the repetition of never and the tidbits of info given in a nice way. Only objection is the last paragraph. I think you could have broken up at the dialogue to let it flow better. :P

A little too melodramatic for my tastes but it's still nice.