With every new piece I read of yours, my jaw drops lower and lower. This is so flawless in every aspect.

I love the word choice of 'thunder' in regards to his laughter. I get the clear sound of a loud, surrounding kind of laugh. Very descriptive. :)

"i see purple summers and violent lovers" I like that phrase. Because of the line break, this wasn't a rhyme or an internal rhyme, but the similar sounds gave a nice rhythm to the poem.

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I really like this. Especially the first part of it. It's beautiful, really :)

I also like the (or am i dying?) part. I don't know, it just really stood out to me. This was awesome. Keep writing! (not that I think that you wouldn't...) You're great with poetry

"Violent lovers." How erotic.

"Purple summers." Unique colour choice. Strong imagery.

"I lament the loss of a soul that I did not yet understand." Brilliant. What a graceful line. Wow. :D

"Or am I dying?" Ah yes, it is difficult sometimes to decide whether one is dying from joy or dying from pain.

Excellent piece!

wow.

wow wow wow.

amazing.

(kind of reminded me of spring awakening.)

but in a good way.