that's true the ending, but nobody learns..

I really like this. It shows that loves not a walk through a fresh meadow. Yes, I just said a walk through a fresh meadow. LOL. But you get my point. :) Good work.

I think the format with the bolding and capitalization and italics and underlining was a bit much. I think you emphasize so much that it doesn't really emphasize anything and becomes distracting.

I like the piece. I think it makes a great point. I also like how you start out contrasting what good love vs bad love is. Nicely done.

PS Sorry I'm so far behind on my alerts!

Very true; I can sort of relate.

Well, not from my perspective, but still...

Very well written. Just imagining the second stanza hurts.
"The color of blood
That slowly leaks from the cuts on their arms"

ouch.

~Yusuf