so. who's on top?

omg. poor robert. i love him. :D

Sorry, I got lazy, so I didn't review before. :P

But I really do love this story. :3 I'm glad I'm caught up on the story. I feel bad for poor Robert. The doctors should have explained the situation better to Adam, so he wouldn't get the wrong idea about him. I can't believe Adam did that to his arm, but I get him reasoning. Though I'm assuming there'll be some kind of mark still there on his arm? But it wouldn't be track marks, so I guess no one'd know he used to be a druggie. I wanna hug him. D: I feel bad for Celia, too. I hope she and Kellan can stick around with Robert and help Adam through his problems. :3

I love Fae. Maybe I'm biased, too, since Karasu is pretty awesome, but I really like Fae. She's a good friend and I like strong women -- it appeals to my inner feminist. :D

He's just taking his anger at Robert out on poor Kellan. D: *Glomps Kellan* Well, if Adam doesn't want him, I'll just keep him to myself. XD I think they take the downtown/uptown thing too seriously. They should at least be friends, despite status quo.

;_; Oh, poor Adam! I feel so bad for him. I mean, sure, he shouldn't be mean to Kellan, but Robert should treat him like he's already redoing drugs or something.

It just breaks my heart when he says: "It's m'fault, y'know. I was mean to 'im. 'f I hadn't been so mean, they wouldn'a 'band'n'd me."

He just sounds so vulnerable. LOL, I'm a softie. >_

Adam, don't do anything stupid! LOL, he should know that Kellan thinks he's a bowl of hot and nummy. XD But I think they're all over-thinking and a little insecure. That's a problem. XD I feel bad for Celia! Adam shouldn't completely ignore her -- s'not nice. D:

I like Celia. I mean, I feel bad for her because of her past, but I'm glad she cleaned up. :)

Again, I love how you do the POV changes. They flow so well! I think Adam's strong enough not to relapse. Robert should believe in him.

I love Kellan's parents. :D That was awesome. XD

But I'm worried -- I don't want to see Robert, Kellen, or Adam hurt. I don't suppose they can have a threesome? Threesomes are kind of hot, you know?

LOL, great chapter.

I think I like Nina. She's amusing. XD

I thought the lemon was great (better than I could do, anyway, since lemons make me nervous). :D

You know, on the topic of lemons, one of the submissions in the antagonist category had a smut scene. LOL, right before the two characters did anything they were talking about bowel movements. I had a wtf moment. XD Mood-killer. xp

Great chapter. :)

LOL, I was *waiting* for that moment. Seriously. And you did not disappoint! XD What will happen now? *Reads further*

Nina's last line killed me. XD I was wondering what you meant with the title of the chapter -- it was just more literal than I thought. XDD

I like the contrast in Kellan's parents (did I mention that I love the name Kellan?) -- you know, how his mom is absent-minded and his dad is intuitive. Usually, if you've noticed, it's almost always the mom who is intuitive to the needs of the gay child. I hope she won't take it too badly. If his dad didn't (assuming he's known for a while) she really shouldn't, although she'll most likely be very disappointed, what with how she wants to be better than the Akers.

Great chappy!

I think you're doing great with the POV changes. There was this one story I liked that switched POVs so ofyen that I had whipflash, LOL. That was probably the only thing I didn't like (in that fic, not yours -- this is perfect so far).

I like how descriptive and realistic you are with the descriptions. I don't much read fics dealing with drugs, but those few I do aren't realistic and don't hold my interest. All I can say is, I love this, and I hope no one ever dies -- hint, hint.

Luci, I think I love you. :3 Though I shouldn't. I'm supposed to be reading more submissions, but I came to take a peek at your Genetics X side-story and fell for this. And it's only the first chapter... *Shakes fist* Thank you for distracting me...and writing this...thus distracting me by writing this. I think you did a great job fleshing out the characters. :D

Here I go, off to read more!

aww poor kellan he's so awkward.
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Robert really seems to be taking it badly. Like someone's kidnapped his first born and threatened to kill it if he didn't have ransom money, but he's working three jobs already and can bearly afford to put food on the table so there's no way he can get it. Just totally stressed and lonely.
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if you want you can ignore that last part. haha!
gah!! can't wait for more!

ah! that's the worst kind of treatmeant EVER! I would try to kill him too. ha ha.
wait... does it actually work??
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Fae seems really nice and really cool! haha.