Hey that was great.
-mb

"Every place has boundaries for a reason." And yet, there are still many who cross these lines of safety. Good line. :)

nice! it's a little bit eery, just the littlest bit. Only because the whole 'holding in the many playing children' thing makes you think of abduction, but it was short and sweet. that little chill of eeriness adds a quirky touch, but in a good way. nice job!

"Every place has boundaries for a reason"

Very good line. I like how the summary is "fences in our minds" because I think we do have those! Great idea comparing it to a fence and a park, loved the idea alot! =D Favouriting!

You are a very good writer, Where do you get your ideas from? Anyway very nice piece of writing Please can you tell me what you think of my story

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Thankyou (Y)