|Reviews for Sonnet 306, Minus 2|
| Louis Denair 6/28/09 . chapter 1
Wow, really juicy verse. It flows so well and the rhymes are sublime. It reminds me of Shakespeare's sonnets very much indeed though perhaps the use of thees and thous is a little bit excessive. The last lines are perfect. Really breath-taking.
| Ernest Bloom 6/27/09 . chapter 1
i can't sonnet.
those last three lines:
| Isca 6/23/09 . chapter 1
You need to go through the poem and fix some of the lines-many are either 9 or 11 syllables long instead of 10.
"Thou may tunnel thyself." Brilliant line. It's very avant-garde. I also really loved the 'coral' part. :D
Keep up the good work!