 Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2009-12-04 . chapter 7I don't know whether to scream at you or hit you. Update! Please? |
 MidnightRythm1990 2009-11-30 . chapter 7ugh ugh ugh it's official... you are evil :p. End of story. Now from the way you write, i'm guessing Australia?
I have a friend there in MElbourne and you talk alot like her, well write but you get my drift. So I'm gonna say you're in school about this time. Or you are on summer holidays... but i am gonna go with the former. So you are evil for such a cliffie chapter, great cute chapter but cliffie nonetheless. So an update ish needed... soon? |
 MidnightRythm1990 2009-11-30 . chapter 6Freaking EPIC! That is the mother of all freakin bombshells. Way to go Bam. |
 MidnightRythm1990 2009-11-30 . chapter 3Youn mentioned Buffy... LOVE YOU FOREVER ^_^
*midnight bows down to Queen of All Things Epic* Hurray! go go go Buffy &_& |
 MidnightRythm1990 2009-11-30 . chapter 1I like the name "BAM" grabbed my attention right away. |
 BoredomKills0620 2009-11-15 . chapter 7So... This story is pretty much awesome. I love Bam; he is completely adorable and unknowingly funny. I wish he would forget this Cece business when it's obvious he really likes Braiden. :P The way he gets so jealous (I love the ball to the head, haha) sometimes makes my tummy do flip-flops. :D For such a seemingly outlandish plot, you've actually made this story pretty realistic, and it's well-developed, too. It's always refreshing to see actual, well-written pieces instead of the many on this site which appear to be written by a teeny-bopper on crack and almost make me have a seizure from all of the grammatical errors and computer lingo in the place of real words. I love your brand of humor as well. Keep it up! And... update soon? :D Please?
God bless,
Chelsea |
 The Jet Black Hotel Mirror 2009-11-14 . chapter 7Okay, I'm trying to fix the 'lazy reviewer' problem. I love this story too and I'm dying to know what is gonna happen next. Bam so likes Braiden that it's not even funny! Little Cece won't be able to last a minute with Bam and all his demanding needs. xD And Noah? He's cool too, but he's eventually gonna have to give Braiden up to the caveman. But that's just what I think will happen. Hehehe. Your character development is pretty good so far, except I'm wondering; how did Bam learn how to talk with fairly good grammar? When we first meet him in the story, he already understands many of the modern and colloquial sayings. And how did he get to our time in the first place?! Hmm, maybe you shall explain that later in the story, eh? Great job thus far. xoxo |
 sheeparelikesocool 2009-11-09 . chapter 7omigosh. you actually HAVE to update!
its wonderful! |
 Grace C. 2009-11-03 . chapter 4 Hey, it's me! I really love this chapter! You're very good, do you know that? Not much sexual tension on Bam's part, but what do I know; he's after all, a cave man. XD |
 apples ate my chocolate bar 2009-10-27 . chapter 7I like Noah he is so funny. oh I'm also beginning to see a lot of you in this. more than in most of your stories. |
 sunshinernnr 2009-10-27 . chapter 7Loved this chapter.
I guess maybe Cecelia is a bit shallow? Although I guess I'd probably give a hot guy a chance, too, even if he was a bumbling idiot when he asked me out.
I love the backwards compliment from Bam: "You're not fat, lacking muscle, but not fat." hehehehe.
Oh, and I wish a guy would hit another guy in the head with a football for me. Bam is so cute being jealous!
Also, I like this line: "Princess yips in approval for me anyway." |
 sukanya 2009-10-25 . chapter 7Had a lot of catching up to do on this story..Cool stuff. I actually like Noah's character a lot. (unless you're gonna make him secretly evil) But how come he's interested in Braiden all of a sudden? seeing as they didn't talk before...
Good chapter.
Sukanya |
 RoseLife 2009-10-24 . chapter 7YAY
Noah seems yummy
I love Bam's reaction ^__^
can't wait for the next update !!
Hope it's soon *wink wink, nudge nudge, hint hint*
:D |
 Cupid's Jinx 2009-10-24 . chapter 7-claps hands-
Yayayayayayayayay!
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-claps hands even more-
Yay!!
:) Just...YAY!
Noah and Braiden equals YAY!
Bam getting jealous equals YAY!
Just...YAY!
Haha!
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P.S. Yay! XD |
 Alex 2009-10-24 . chapter 3 XDXDXD i love the Rob Pats bit xD ugh so funny, so true.
great story aswell =] |