oh yes yes yes! i say make this a big big project! im exited already, and you've only got one chapter!!

I can't wait to see what happens

It looks like it'll be another big hit!

^_^

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! LOL.
Sorry I had to laugh, her reaction is so funny!
Good luck with this. ^_^ I hope it turns out well L'Archange!

ImmortalIncarnate

This sounds like a promising story. It's gotten me quite intrigued, despite the fact that he's just torn her heart through her chest and dropped it into a pool of molten lava. :-D I'm really excited for this story of yours.

this is from another story? @w@; it felt like i was reading a future excerpt from ABCP, with the "evil being", "sorcerer", and "princess" in the mix. not to mention the narrating protagonist sounds JUST like Cassie.

this new story looks pretty good, i really think you should continue it. anyways i hope u update ABCP soon xox

I'm going to hunt you down, girl! I swear, how can you do this to me?!! Gah!

Okay, so injuring you won't be very beneficial to ABCP, so I guess I'd better hold off ... lol. ;)

Now, on to this little teaser.

I thought it was pretty interesting. I'm intrigued, and would like to know how in the heck this stand-off came about. What does he want? And boy, is he cold. I felt sorry for the girl, since he just ripped her heart out and did 100 jumping jacks on it (in effect), and then walked off without a care in the world. Though, if he's being so lenient, he must not be completely bad. This looks like it's going to be another winner of a story!

But L'Archange, I'm begging you ... Please Update ABCP! I need my Ersades fix!!

Nice story-start, here, hun! You should definitely keep on it!

wow , i really liked it...it definetly holds promise for a great story , i think you should continue it!

This is amazing! I am so glad you're using a sorcerer once again rather than the same old vampire or werewolf. I can't wait for you to finish ABCP (which is also amazing) and then post this one! (if you actually write all of it)

Fantastic!
I would definitely read this is you decided to post the story.
Update soon!
=)

Interesting excerpt. I'd like to know what the riddle is. So, if you continue this story, I'd certainly read it!

GAH! Yes! Do it when you finish ABCP (which I am waiting for impatiently)! I love that this one has socerers in it too because it was in ABCP and that is my FAVE story on this site!

I didn't really know what was going on though (well duh! it was a snippet) but I still felt really drawn to your protagonist and felt the pull of the male lead but also felt a kind of dislike towards him (kind of like Ersades!) which is fantastic! How far have you gotten on writing this? Do you need a beta (am I allowed to volunteer myself?)?

Anyways! UPDATE SOMETHING SOON!