I really liked this! It had a creepy sort of feel to it with the descriptions of the spiders and cobwebs, it made the ending a surprise. Well written :)

"The cold wind's breaking through." God. That's so angsty. I love it, though. At least the speaker acknowledges that she's about to 'crack.

"I hear them dance at night." Whoa! Way to give me a heart attack! Chilling insect imagery. ;)

I liked this. Keep up the good work. :)