This was very written. It actually made my heart race. Which sorta crept me out..(In a good way, I think.) lol. I really enjoyed this read.

I would have loved for this to have spanned out into a several chapter-ed story. You have a lot of creativity, Panda. Right now I am hoping for you to write a series. I think it would be great!

much love and many hugs

Niki

Ooh, a nice twist! I hadn't expected that! I enjoyed reading this. It was very dark, but it was also original and unique. Favorited, most definately. :]

-Ayame

that was epic! keep it up!

Wow! I was really impressed! I admit, when I read the summary, I thought it was very vague and a generic idea so I was skeptical in deciding to read it. BUT once I started to actually READ the story, I totally changed my mind! (summaries are kinda hard to write anyway) I never expected that was how the story was going to end O_O! It was beautiful and dark u_u A! xD