OMG

I loved the Ending, this is one of the few werewolf stories I Have read that actually end great :D

You have no idea how enjoyable this story was to read.

Though one thing kind of bugged me at the end, in chapter 38 where Mae meets her grandparents, she walks into the living room to see her grandmother bending over a cradle "A woman had her back to us, mending to a cradle which I presumed had a child within it."

Though, through that chapter the child wasn't mentioned at all and the grandmother didn't finish her story, Or at least it felt like she had more to say.

But all in all the story was very enjoyable, and i look forward to reading many more stories from you. Keep up the great Writing!

Ja-Ne _

Good story, a bit too long but I'm surprised you have so little reviews!

Hi, I'm really enjoying reading this story. I'm just wondering, why bela? if your trying to say beautiful in italian it's bella, just wondering because bela doesnt mean anything in italian. Anyway i'm loving this story

shouldn't it be at least a little embarrassing to tell a story like that in front of practically strangers? i dunno.

i'm going to take a gander and say paws is stephan and that why they have such strong emotions for each other? or at least from his point of view... maybe?

hm..

what the...?

*sigh* I want to think about the whole internet thing as creepy, but somehow I don't . lol :P it's your fault

Omg! This is so not a review for your story, you already know I love it! I'm obsessed with Harry Potter too. haha sorry anyway. I just had to comment that your so not riding in that boat alone. Right now, I'm counting down til November. :)

I loved this story. It was a great read. As i was reading it I told my friend about it and she had me read her like the first 6 chapters one night and she was hooked. I think she messaged you. Her name on here is Everly. I loved reading this. I can't wait to check out Lucid Silence. Keep writing great stories. :)

I found this story the day before yesterday and it was great story!

I could had finished that in a day because it was so addicting but of course, I need to do some other things. Haha!

I like it! It was so unique and good!

I want a sequel! But this story is great with or without the sequel.

BUT it sort of reminded me of some famous novels (I'm not gonna name it. Sorry!).

Also, you had some spelling and grammar errors.

That's it! Keep up the good work! :)

Ahh-Maze-Ing story. (:

Awesome story! Loved the ending but I'm really sad it's all over... :(

beautiful

Congrats on finishing your story. I bet you feel proud, relieved, tired...

Thanks for sharing your imagination with us!

you said contraption instead of contraction.

that kind of took the intensity out of the moment.

good story non the less.

That was like the cutest story I have ever read! I love it!