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   antoniasaurous.foley 3/28/13 . chapter 1Hi, I am planning to get further into this book but I do want to say that you might want to proof read your story a bit. There's a couple of mistakes in there which should be corrected. I am trying not to sound like a bitch because I can already tell you've spent a lot of time working on this and the story sounds so amazing. I am looking forward to reading the rest of your story but I thought I should tell you about the few mistakes. |
| Guest 1/14/13 . chapter 21 OoooooooooooooooooooooOooooo oooooooooooOoooooooooooooohh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! |
| Guest 1/13/13 . chapter 14 Holy fuck! |
| Guest 1/13/13 . chapter 8 Oh that little nun slut! I like how they had a little laugh in the end, great story. |
| Guest 1/12/13 . chapter 1 I stopped at "long black hair that fell to his waist." to tell you how amazing this story was already! |
| AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick 11/10/12 . chapter 34 :D |
| Brat Face 10/14/12 . chapter 30 I have to say this oral rape scene is hot! |
| emz 9/2/12 . chapter 34 that ... was ... fucking amazing 0_0 the best story i've ever read on this site and i've been stalking it for a while! haha |
| curator 6/27/12 . chapter 34 Wow! This dude is so twisted! If I was Zoe, I'd go master taekwondo or something. Anyway, awesome story! Love the storyline and all! |
| Mexine 5/2/12 . chapter 34 woooooooow... I feel sorry for abaddon although he was so horrible...still think he's amazing ...and Zoe...is really strong...if I were her,I don't think I would've had the guts to send him back to he'll at all ... your characters are realistic...and am sad that it's all over now cause strange as it is,I've grown attached to abaddon and zoe ...am hoping you'll be struck with inspiration and make a second deal with the devil book?:) I have my fingers crossed lol...ya,so this story was absolutely amazing,great work,and I must commend you on your English, currently am learning spanish and lemme tell you,it isn't exactly a piece of cake,and for you to have become so good at english ,you must have worked your ass you did a fabulous job... and I will be reading your other work... of course... and um... 1question...at the end,abandon was sitting in he'll basically biding his time until he would have been allowed to go back to earth and see Zoe right?my question is,wouldn't Zoe be long dead by then?because by the time he got out,years and years and years would have passed by then wouldn't it? |
| Silverwolf295 4/18/12 . chapter 33 i'm in love with your story |
| Silverwolf295 4/12/12 . chapter 17 I'm in lov |
| Silverwolf295 4/11/12 . chapter 15 i love the story keep it up :) |
| Moons 12/26/11 . chapter 34 Maybe you should make this into a series! Each story showcasing a different character but leading up to one thing. It's like what some published authors like Sherrilyn Kenyon and Gena Showalter are doing. It can be leading up to apocalypse and I wouldn't mind! This story is just awesome! |
| mia aurora 12/8/11 . chapter 34 yeay finish reading ! :D |
