It was alright.

Bravo!
But proof read it one more time, I caught a few mistakes.

I kinda agree on what Lucy did... that mark was insane... and he probably would get a lesser punishment because of it... she did what she had to do... This story is amazing, add a little more description and I'm sure you'll win!
Grtz Silencia

Error dearest

It sickened her to touch him, but she pushed him violently away from me.

I would fix it if I were you