I loved the imagery in this poem. "Lead and glass glittering into her veins" was one in particular that jumped out at me.

Nicely done!

-Steph

"Heaven-bound." Aha! That's so beautiful! :)

I found it fascinating that the speaker would suggest that Eden isn't any place for a lady--surely such a place could use the kindness of such a woman. But, alas, I see what you mean, since the blame for 'the fall of man' is often placed upon Eve's shoulders.

Keep up the good work.