Aw, reunited at last! I guess Alix is finally going to meet his papa and his mama's got some explaining to do...should be interesting. The memory snippets at the end of the chapter were a bit confusing at first but it was still a great chapter.

Gotta be honest...I was a little confused by the second half of that chapter but...I think it was Alix's life flashing before his eyes before he succumbed to death, or near-death, yes?

I dunno.

Much loves to the story, though =P

HM x

awsome story can't wait to see what happens

OMG! Sorry for the long absence, school and dance and evereything finally caught up to me and Im really just wasting time and procrastinating right now but this chapter was amazing. I enjoyed the progression of the plot even though nothing eventful happened. Ill read the next two chapters soon but i really cant read any more right now!

Taste The Rainbow (TTFN),
~F-J

This is an awesome story! I was sad of the fact that I reached the end...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! :D I can't wait until the next chapter is up. ^_^

OhMyGoodness That was amazing.
Loved it so much. Can't wait for more xD
Much loves to the stories and for M&MV.

HM x

OhMyGoodness!

Awesome. I like seeing Alix with a bit of fight ;] This chapter was nicely...inspirational, I guess? Dunno the right word for it, but I loved it.

Much loves for the story.

HM x

Woot Woot, GO ALIX! Seriously, I love his toughness xD.

-happy dance-

please update sooN!

...-puppy eyes-

AMAZING. 2 notes.

You used 'of course' to begin 2 sentences that followed eachother in the middle of the paragraph right before the break. and also you forgot an 'it' I think, RIGHT before the break. There was another one, but it wasnt that important.

I LOVE the new title! Thanks for the acknowledgement, too. Sorry it took so long to get to even this chapter but Ill find time to read more soon! Good luck with all the editing!

Taste the rainbow! (Mixed Berry Edition)
~F-J

Holy hell!
Didn't see that coming =P
nicely done. And yay I can't wait for COA!
I shall be watching for it!
Much loves x
HM x

Great chapter~ I, like the other reviewer, also like the last paragraph. Alix's revenge plans make me giggle maniacally. lol Oh, and about the way BL is written... It can honestly be confusing at times. Like in this chapter I was lost for a while after the page break (idk if that's what you call it), but it's never so confusing that I am deterred from continuing to read. I also kinda get the feeling that some things are getting kinda repetitive. Like Alix still is reflecting on the same things that got him in his current situation. Don't get me wrong I still love it. Just a lil drawn out, but I don't mind. Hope you start off school well, and good luck with your new school year, too. :]

Aww Alix! Yay Alix!
>.< I'm doing a little pep rally in the background for him. And I LOVE the last paragraph. Made me smile =]
Loves x
HM x

notes:
In this paragraph at the end: "Considering this idea... to somehow reach my father’s years because of that." you have an unneccessary 'y' in there.
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Great chapter but youre doing that past tense thing again. I thought we were going back to present. Cop-Out! Anywaym great job, looking forward to more!!

Taste the rainbow
~F-J

No notes. Sorry I havent been sooner to stduy these new chapters... School has this new 'homework' thing and I'm not too fond of it. For the first time in 3 years Im motivated to do my homework and I lose touch with interesting stories and conversations. I love all my classes but JEES! Anyway, great chapter... I hate the guards, congratulations. I feel even more empathetic toward Alix, if thats possible! And Im honestly out of words.

Tasted the Rainbow ;D
~F-J

"Violence is what I'm good at."

...Haha xD
Can't wait for more; really, you have me on pins and needles =]
Loves for the story, and I'm so excited about COA.
Hehe.

HM x