Love, "She holds all your sins, your angers and pleasures, so that you don't have to."

Very beautiful word choice and very interesting concept.
Lovely job.

rolliepollie44

Interesting.

So this figure within ones self seems to be some sort of feeling, but not one to be felt likely. Perhaps she is dying because their is a cold, disenchantment where nothing seems important. As if mediocrity fills up us instead.

Not sure. Sometimes it is difficult to interpret short poetry, or these silly little fixtures of words in general. Yet I never cease to try. Well done, it definitely caught my attention.

As Always
Ashelin