very beautiful and powerful message!

Very neat formatting-

the choppiness adds to the mood.

Love the honesty in it,

brutal stuff but you did a beautiful job.

rolliepollie44

The form of this poem is quite fun and creative. The poem also flows and rhymes very well. I love that the choppy, odd nature of the format coincides well with the speaker's message about the side effects of war (i.e. war leaves us feeling damaged and broken). Keep up the great work. (: