Wow. Intense and goodly confusing prologue. I really liked it :D
That big paragraph really worked, so many good descriptions. I really felt as if I was there :D

Why is it that when I decide to quit, you join?

Syntax is fine (mostly) but tenses need work. I'm hypocritical I know but it's easier spotted in someone else's writing. Can you tell I'm in a bad mood?

Lovely intro. It sounds really interesting. Happy writing and oh my God, you have reviews already... your very first story and your very first chapter! Wow! :) I'm so proud of you!

I really like the intro. It's really interesting so far and I can't wait to see what will happen next but what's with the poem and does Imogen mean anything?

one- the sentence featured in the summary, i was hooked at that
two- frost love ♥

i am digging your descriptions. the word play. the barely veiled distaste. you have my full attention if yer planning on continuing this.

(&imogen, that is too obscure a name to not be a reference, surely? it suits this character to a t.)

Hm I like it. It was a bit confusing at times. But your description was very good. Lots of details to sent the scene. I'm looking forward to Chapter 1!!

Sophie :3