 bunnypopcorn 2009-12-08 . chapter 1Wow, that was great :). It has a very soft feeling to it. |
 Eternal Skies 2009-09-08 . chapter 1simple but fascinating! your writing is really good!
"And the sea between them holds hands" wow |
 in theory 2009-08-21 . chapter 1This is beautiful, "the sea between them holds hands" stunning. |
 sweet subway 2009-08-12 . chapter 1this poem is so adorable! :D
i love it! |
 surroundedANDalone 2009-08-04 . chapter 1That's beautiful. I don't know what else to say. Wish my poetry came out sounding like that. |
 Lady Livia 2009-07-22 . chapter 1I love this.
It's so cute. |
 Mirabella 2009-07-21 . chapter 1This is lovely.
And the rhyming is very good. And the name of the poem. I always like to see things with great names! :) I think it add to the descriptive ideas in the poem. |
 Samurai-Soldier 2009-07-13 . chapter 1Wow, very good for so short a poem. It can be hard to say so much so quickly, but you pull it off nicely. The rhyming was simple but effective and the over all flow was almost sing-songy (or, that how I read it at least). It's a very cute concept and captures a simple essence of childhood friendship. Mucho love for this piece, Peace |
 Fleet Sparrow 2009-07-10 . chapter 1Wow. That was really beautiful. And, even though I rarely like poetry, I really like this. Very well done. I didn't realize it rhymed at all, until I read it aloud, which gave it an even better quality. I'd say it could be expanded, but, as it is, it's fine. I'd suggest leaving it as is; no reason to fix what ain't broke. |
 East-0f-Eden 2009-07-02 . chapter 1it makes me think of children worlds apart being united by the sea which reaches all across the globe. |
 Chidaruma Kamisori 2009-07-02 . chapter 1I really like the idea behind this.
It's very cute and very true.
-Jessica
PS Your review made me Lol. |
 Isca 2009-07-02 . chapter 1The message of this poem is delightful: no matter what seperates us, whether it be distance or time or age, we are still connected. The poem flows so well that the reader barely notices that it rhymes--it takess talent to write like that. The imagery is lovely as well. Keep up the great work. :) |
 LotusandOrchid 2009-07-02 . chapter 1This made me smile. The imagery of two children, maybe separated by a sea between them, yet still so much the same, is comforting. :) The only thing I have to say negative about this is the length. I felt that you could expound on your poem a bit more, but other than that, good. Keep writing! |
 Sergeant Rock 2009-07-01 . chapter 1This is pretty good. I don't normally like poetry at all, but this kind of made me think. |
 LostInMe 2009-06-28 . chapter 1I didn't even realize when I first read this that it was a rhyming poem. That's how well the words fit. And just...wow. So symbolic and meaningful. |