Wow, that was great :). It has a very soft feeling to it.

simple but fascinating! your writing is really good!

"And the sea between them holds hands" wow

This is beautiful, "the sea between them holds hands" stunning.

this poem is so adorable! :D
i love it!

That's beautiful. I don't know what else to say. Wish my poetry came out sounding like that.

I love this.
It's so cute.

This is lovely.
And the rhyming is very good. And the name of the poem. I always like to see things with great names! :) I think it add to the descriptive ideas in the poem.

Wow, very good for so short a poem. It can be hard to say so much so quickly, but you pull it off nicely. The rhyming was simple but effective and the over all flow was almost sing-songy (or, that how I read it at least). It's a very cute concept and captures a simple essence of childhood friendship. Mucho love for this piece, Peace

Wow. That was really beautiful. And, even though I rarely like poetry, I really like this. Very well done. I didn't realize it rhymed at all, until I read it aloud, which gave it an even better quality. I'd say it could be expanded, but, as it is, it's fine. I'd suggest leaving it as is; no reason to fix what ain't broke.

it makes me think of children worlds apart being united by the sea which reaches all across the globe.

I really like the idea behind this.
It's very cute and very true.

-Jessica

PS Your review made me Lol.

The message of this poem is delightful: no matter what seperates us, whether it be distance or time or age, we are still connected. The poem flows so well that the reader barely notices that it rhymes--it takess talent to write like that. The imagery is lovely as well. Keep up the great work. :)

This made me smile. The imagery of two children, maybe separated by a sea between them, yet still so much the same, is comforting. :) The only thing I have to say negative about this is the length. I felt that you could expound on your poem a bit more, but other than that, good. Keep writing!

This is pretty good. I don't normally like poetry at all, but this kind of made me think.

I didn't even realize when I first read this that it was a rhyming poem. That's how well the words fit. And just...wow. So symbolic and meaningful.