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Reviews For: If Wishes Were Fishes
Stockholm 2009-06-26 . chapter 1
It was sad & cute at the same time. Something everyone has gone through, regardless of gender and age.

In the beginning, the dialogue slightly confused me, it took a double take on a few lines to see who was saying what, but otherwise, it was done really nicely.

Good job :)
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