Please update soon! I like the story so far. Just check grammer and spelling and it will be great!

Oh.. romance :) Loved this chapter, the dialouge flowed so so so well. Update soon, this is like, the cutest story I have read in such a long time!

Hello! I love this! I don't usually read stories like this. Hehe, just thought I'd tell you that, because I love this one! I like the "romance." I think it is so sweet. Also, it is subtle, which is good. You aren't rushing into "love." That is one of my pet peeves, when people rush the love aspect. In real life, people don't say 'I love you' in a week or even months sometimes. Awesome chapter, update soon!

this is nice..
i wanna see the opinion of jazlyn about itzel =)
plz update soon

Wow, I love this so much. I love how you switch from poetry to writing, it is a really great idea. It was so good! AH! Is there going to be more? Or is this it? Anyways, I loved this. If there is more, I cannot wait to read it!!