COol, interesting. I like it.

Sorry to hear it. Sell it on amazon! I cried the entire time i read this. I would love to have it on my kindle

I am in utter tears. I don't recall ever, ever crying so much in a story. Goodness, this was so beautiful. It wasn't just good with great character development and meaningful relationships and humor and a bit of sadness; I find those elements in many a SKOW winner/nominee and yet yours stands out so wholly (like purple hair). I think it's really the message you brought through in this, something we can all relate to as we each have our own lives to live. I loved Bernie, Jonah, and Becks. I even grew to forgive Vanessa, her mom, dad.

This was extremely well written. Notably memorable. Original. I am curious as to what prompted you to write this stunningly devastating piece. Seriously applauded.

Best,
xkcbby

Hello. I just finished reading your story. I cried non-stop from chapter twenty eight to end. This was such a beautiful story. It made me appreciate everything I have. I aspire to one day write like you. Beckas story was life-changing for myself and all of the other readers; it truly touched me. I hope you continue writing and never stop, because you're to talented for that. Please try to get this published, I know it would be a New York Times best seller. I loved this story more than I can say. Truly beautiful.

So i am just now finishing the story and i wanted to say that I LOVED IT!

You had me hooked from the first chapter - epitome of all tear-jerkers Thank you *salutes*

Beautifully written, it made me laugh and cry.

Gorgeous.

I just want to say that I seriously LOVE this. One of the best stories I've read by far. I stayed up 'til three AM reading this last night and made it to this chapter, and I woke up this morning and immediately went back. Great story. Awesome job. :)

This sounds like such an interesting premise. Really like it so far!

I love it! On my favs listt :)

It's creative, and almost made me cry (That's pretty big, I never ever cry when I read)
I think that you are very talented, you could make it big as an author.
Keep it up! I it :D

I want to say thanks for putting up this incredible story. I read some of the reviews and I must say that I agree with all of them. You are a fantastic writer, and have moved me to tears. I was expecting her to make an amazing recovery, but I'm glad you didn't do that. I'm horribly saddened that she died, but at the same time I know the whole thing would be different if she didn't.

Jonah and Becks are incredibly real characters that have human souls, and I appreciated every moment, good or bad, of the story. A job very well done!

Thank you for writing something that will happen to us all one day-some sooner than others-and thank you for making it okay.

I'm in bits.

As you no doubt know I haven't stopped reading this pretty much since I started. I rushed through the final chapters like a fiend and now I'm at the end I just want to say thank you.

Thank you so very much for writing something which moved and affected my like no other. You're an incredible write and I am so happy I stumbled across this. I think I might go back to chapter 1 all over again.

All the best, thank you as always,

Abby x

Sean needs a slap -.- and to sort out his priorities. He's got a freaking fiancé and still snogs her terminally ill sister. Urgh. At least Becka & Jonah are okay. I want to say you're breaking my heart but I have a feeling it's all downhill from here :(

Dammit all bloody Jonah! Of course she was going to say no! Gah! And now she can't see colour and if something permanent happens he'll never forgive himself!

At least she and her sister made up, a little and a lot in a way. I realised I'm nearing the end as it were and that worries me. This story is too good to end.

I can't decide if she did the right thing. I mean, she did the more realistic thing but... Poor Jacob. And again with the emotional turmoil :( Poor Goldie too :'( I think I have a mild fear of piranhas now although I suppose that's sensible.

Many merci's.