I absolutely love the theme and the plot of your story. It does seem to be going a little fast right now, so I guess I'll have to keep reading!

I don't think it's going too fast at all! Oh, Jonah. I'm so intrigued. I really want to know what they have!

I love Becka's progression and Jonah's character. I adore your writing-it's so easy to read and beautiful too, and I love how you tied in the quote. I love their banter; they have serious chemistry. I'm SO curious about where this is going.

So cute, such an interesting start, your story seems so original already. I love how you don't just say she has OCD, you show it, and it seems so realistic. And Jonah is adorable already. -like!-

Hey!

I haven't been on FP in a damn lonng time, lol. But I decided to catch up on your story, and it just makes me so incredibly sad. But I love it and it's addicting, so I won't be able to stop reading it. Anyhow, I just wanted to drop by and say that your story is still fantastic, and I'm so in love with it. :)

dontneedyou

:) So sad but I love it so much!

So I love this story, it is so well done and it makes me cry a bit but it's beautiful

All I want for christmas is an update!

I am on the verge of tears. Oh my gosh. I just can't take the sadness.

One question: did you ever say what disease was actually killing her? I can't quite recall.

Love,

Ashlyn

P.S. You reviewed my story way back when and I am in some major need of an idea or two on how to continue it. Any suggestions would be much appreciated :)

She's going to die... and I'm going to hate this story...lol

Update!

Oh me, oh my you have out done yourself... This is amazing! I love this story and you write it so well! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Ps: Glade to see an update!

I just found this story today, and I'm reviewing to tell you that it is one of the most heartbreaking and beautiful things which I have ever read.

I love Becka's character and how she was reconciled with her family through her illness, I love how Bernie became her friend through that one strange encounter, and I loved how you showed her being cut in half.

One of the saddest moments for me was when Bernie put Becka's photo with the photo of his sister. It was such a brief moment but it was really heartbreaking.

I probably sound really false and considered, writing this, but I'm hoping that it's obvious that I really do think that you've written a brilliant story, and that I'm really desperate to see more.

I would love to see more of Brooke. I really liked how she was the one to really tell Becka off for lying and I really like her character.

This story is just so well-written- I've sat here and read the entire thing from beginning to end and I still want to read more. The characters are believeable and funny because they are so real. Even reading this and knowing it will end in Becka dying, I'm hoping that she will recover, because I love the characters and will feel truly sad at the end of the story.

I'm not good at giving tips for improvement, particurlarly when I love a story, so I'll not do that. I would like to say that I admire anyone who can write as well as you can. And I only got this FictionPress account today so that I could review your story properly.

...Yeah. Please write more soon?

Such a sad chapter :( I love Jonah for always being there for Becka though :)

Uh. Maze. Ing.

To say the least. :)

I liked this chapter a lot because of all the emotional stuff. Especially with the comic relief of the previous chapter.

And I can deal with that many more chapters.

Great job.

Mary

Ooh, so good and so sad!

:O

My dear Kayla, I can't believe this is almost over. It will just make the crying worse! :'(

I like your ending with the 'Screw you. That's all.'

Very nice and I can't wait!

This is heartbreaking how she feels so confused and everything so I can't expect her to get over this. Aww, so sad :(

Update soon, my dear!