This was even batter love it

oh, my. it's almost done. and she's dying. i know, that's really obvious but it's just hard to fathom that the main character is dying. it'll be interesting to see how you end it. i can see Becka's family kind of "adopting" Bernie and Jonah. and Jonah taking all her journals and publishing them into a book. i can also see Jonah going through a tough time where he wants to kill himself again but i think he'd get through it.

great as always, though it keeps getting sadder. I can't wait to see how it ends, i guess there really isn't much left, which is sad, but makes sense.

hopefully you'll keep updating regularly :)

I think I am actually in love with this story.

It is so amazingly sad and just amazing.

I can't wait to see how it ends, please update soon :)

xox Emily

UGH, I hate you for making me cry :'[ Ugh, and the letters at the beginning and end...I cant wait for Jonahs..UGH I hate that we all knows shes most likely gonna die... Unless you want to be nice and make some sort of miracle happen! I love this story but UGH its so hard to read..

Hey sis, I think that this chapter is the greatest! You need to update as soon as possible! You are such a great, talented, amazing writer. WHY DIDN'T YOU GET ME DUTCH BROS THIS MORNING! I love you! I hope this didn't emberass you! Love you -Riah.

This story is both beautiful and inspiring. I marvel at your mind Kayla.

Update soon (:

This chapter is so interesting it makes me want to read the whole book. The first line caught my attention its super duper good awsome i love it.

Eh, I'm too lazy to sign in ;P

So...this chapter came very, very close to making me cry. As in, if it had gone on just two sentences longer with her and Bernie, I would be bawling here, alone, in the much-too-quiet computer lab. Seriously, when he put her picture next to the one of his sister...that was just really powerful to me, very intense and meaningful in a really, really sad way.

Oh goodness, I love Bernie. The stories coming to a close now, and it's just really...strong. Sad, yes, but happy too and it's just really strong. I'm loving it. And the letter to Vanessa...that was perfect, I loved it. Getting cut in half? Heh, well Not-So-Harry may be cheap, but she got the job done, no ;) Poor Bernie, missing out on the real deal.

Anywhosit, this is lovely, as always, and I never cease to wonder at how much it's grown from where it started, and how your writing itself has become so...alive and powerful. You've got a real gift here ;)

Love ya!

-jazzy

It feels as though it's very close to the end. Which makes me sad. :'( See? Sad.

Good, as always, Kayla. :)

Ah you updated! I loved it, it was so cute and funny but also bittersweet :'). I like how you finished the letter to Vanessa at the end

glad you updated! this is wonderful, as always :D

loved the parrot! and loved the chapter!

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.

I am actually in love with this story so so so so so so so so much please update as soon as you can!

Happy Thanksgiving :) xx

i loved the part when she cut the picture in half. it was hilarious. and the bird. it was so sad to see Bernie in the end. especially when he put her picture in next to his sister's. it's going to be interesting after she dies. honestly, in the back of my mind, i'm hoping you're going to pull out some random, million to one chance scenerio that makes her live. i know it most likely won't happen. *sigh*