O. MY. GOD. THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST EVER BOOKS... NEW CHAPTER PLEASE!

once upon a time, there was an epic, but unfinished story...

c'mon, it's been a month. c-o-m-e-b-a-c-k!

from wherever u are.

WE

NEED

U

huh, no i never knew that either. totally weird.

but anyways,

oh my gard she's going to try and finish that damn list! poor bernie is in for a treat! great chapter though, and i'm itching for teh finale!

that was an awesome way to do it. i was surprised by how unconfusing it was. the only one wasn't sure about was the first one... i mean, i figure it was her mother rather tan say brooke or May's mum eventually, but i still wasn't sure waht she was on about... but yeah all the other you could totally tell by the tine and teh context, and yeah, awesome.

not having becks reaction to it really made you focus on what they were saying, and it was better that way than getting all overemotional with becks side too, i reckon

yeah and i agree with teh monkey re review replies :) Don't you? i don't expect one for every single review, especiaslly when they've got squillions like you, but its nice to know someone reads them and they don't just evaporate into the ether ;) I often wait for teh first review reply to see waht the author is interested in, so that i don't waste their time with stuff they aren't intrested in in teh next reviews... look, i need to read teh last chapter now though eh?

oh man, i really feel for Brooke here. how ferikkin frightning is this for her? ok, not so much the being dumped with her cousin's weird girlfriend, but, yeah, you know. all right, 'nuff reviewing, I gotta find out wahts happens... :O

Oh my gosh where to begin? Well, i haven't been reviewing BECAUSE ive been on vacation! mhm yeah i got baptized, went to christian camp left the state and all in all it was a great summer! This story is amazing. Ive cried because of it! I really do suggest you get published.

So this isn't my computer, so I can't sign in, but OMGYAY!

This was a great chapter, by the way.

Update update update! Your awesome at what you do! If anyone says other wize punch them in the face. You have to update soon! I wan't to read it before I go to camp!

Oh. My. Freaking. God.

I dont even have anything to say about this chapter because I love this story so much. Haha I love the limo driver he's so cool.

I really dont want Becks to die D: but I guess she has to? I wish it didnt have to happen though but I can't wait to see where shes taken Bernie :]

Update son xox

Babe! i honestly really really like this story. im soo happy and proud of u. theirs only been like one chapter that was a little slow but other then that i enjoyed the whole thing start to finish. im not big on reading unless the book is good and can keep my attention, which this definitely did. i miss u soo much and thought it very funny when u would use names of people that we know. for some reason made me very happy lol beck kinda reminds me of u babe, strong, amazing, caring, and has good friends that love her lots.

I just cried like a baby. What Jonah said was so absolutely precious. I can't believe she is dying. Well we all sort of knew from the beginning that she was dying but that the death is so close to now, is really sad. I have loved this story from the first word so keep up the good work :)

I would've reviewed sooner however I've been so busy with life: college preparations, doctor visits, and preparations for a cruise, that I simply lacked the time. This is fabulous: impeccable writing, consistency with characterization, and believable dialogue, it's all here. These are shining staples of your work. I already adore Jonah and Becka oh so much, but reading over how she lied to Brooke about the severity of her condition broke my heart a bit. A part of me could empathize with why she needed to hide it, why she still couldn't grasp the reality of her death, that it was all very real, and that lying to a little thirteen year old girl wasn't going to help.

A reviewer mentioned in their review that Jonah's confession to her seemed unbelievable. I respectfully disagree with that, I must say. There are many kinds of boys-men in the world essentially, sensitive ones, insensitive ones, laidback ones, and likewise very open and amiable ones. Jonah is a sensitive guy, some guys really would openly confess to their dying loved one. They would realize that renal failure and a brain tumor is stealing precious moments away from what they have so they would try to salvage that by getting everything they might have pent up in the open now. That's possible. So yeah, I felt that particular part was believable.

I love Bernie and his "oh my gosh Babe" sort of concern for her. He's such a breath of fresh air.

Also I want to thank you again, unless I haven't already, for reviewing my story; reading this again really enabled med to dig myself out of the plot bunny rut. That story I penned, needs to be finished, so thank you. _

- TBP

P.S. Keep writing, you're brilliant at it.

ups sorry haha, it was heart-warming-ly :)

write pronto!

Hm maybe she can publish her list? XD

i hope she can complete it anyway T.T

Another amazing chapter,

well done. :D