oh my god... i've laughed and cryed so hard at this story... it's just... so amazing.

so heartwormingly, heartbreakingly amazing.

GOD this is so hard to read... and at the same time, so so much for writing it. even if it breaks my heart when it ends, i can't wait for more :)

i don't know what else to say. just...

keep writing and i'll take it and deal with it it until is time to say goodbye :)

xoxo

Im too lazy to log in so from HystericalLaughter.

I want her to live and love a lot longer. .

Oh! I can't wait this is really cute, though I'm going to cry when beca dies :( cuz I like her alot and poor Jonah *sigh* good work! I love it!

Naww it's so sad, but I love the humour that you keep injecting. If this was completely serious I doubt I'd be reading.

I'm glad that Becka is trying to finish her list! If it were me, I'd have given up by now lol

Not much to say, except no, you weren't the only one, and I guess this is nearing the end now :(

Luffs lea xx

The conversation that Becka and Jonah has is very intense. I heart it

I loved the ending of this chapter...super funny! I was literally dying of laughter picturing Becka driving. As always, another superb chapter!

Becka rocks. LOL. Lovely mental image there. Purple hair, oxygen tank strapped on, driving a limo jerkily. Sad, but wow. Loved this update!

Jonah's speech...I felt it to be a bit unnatural. In the sense, I didn't think he would, in reality, say something like that. I mean, guys aren't that forthcoming about their feelings anyway, and Jonah was too honest. I can't say I know a lot about that, but that was just my two cents!

Okay, so where I live, it's about midnight. I was at my mom's party, and am very tired. But I had to review.

Basically, it was okay. Not great. But that's only because this seems kinda like a building chapter, and not a climax chapter. Next chapter will give me answers, hopefully?

Oh, boy, Miss Kayla. (:

Just for the record, I didn't know either.

So, at first it was really sad and depressing but then I'm starting to smile at how funny I know you're going to make it.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, just not it being the end.

Can't wait! I'm so excited!

(:

Thanks for posting this. I'm really in a depressed mood today, so it helped me take my mind of everything for a short while. Thanks so much.

I feel sad. Becks shouldn't have to die. She's too sweet to die. And gosh, poor Jonah. Poor boy. :( I can almost feel his pain through the screen, seriously. It really is sad. I have a really bad feeling that you're actually going to follow through with killing her, which totally makes me feel like strangling someone! Well, not really, but it makes me so sad. I don't want her to die, she needs to have a life ahead of her, she still so young! That is so terrible, but your writing is absolutely amazing, so continue on with the story. It's a VERY amazing story, you have a great way of writing. :D

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i loved the ending. i want becka to cross everything off her list. it was cute. lawrence is adorable with his little comments. is it your mission to make everybody cry at some point during this story? trust me, it will probably happen, so congrats if it is. i think i've said this before, but you do an amazing job with portraying the emotions. i'm glad sean is going to tell vanessa. i hope she doesn't 'punish' him though. she should definitely forgive him.

the owl city/death cab for cutie is news to me. i didn't know that. for the longest time i didn't even realize owl city was only one person and not a band. so on top of another great chapter, i learned something. update soon )

Ah Im excited! Im soo scared and i dont want her too die but, she will [ Its so sad

well, first of all, you weren't the only one who didn't realise the thing about Owl City and Death Cab for Cuite...

but that's not the point-

the point is that I am really happy that you updated again... and that this was a happy chapter.

too bad she is gonna die so soon... but I guess that's kinda the plot behind this story.

I really like how you've put the list of things Rebecka needs to do before she dies throughout the whole story- it seems to give her a reason to continue living, so she can do all those things before she dies. well, other than Jonah, I guess.

also, I like the whole thing about (in this chapter and in the last) waking up everyday for someone- or for a moment of thinking someone was still there.

oh, and by the way, you are gonna make me cry. chapter 27 and 28 combined just about did. :)

so I would just like to say that I really love your story, and especially this chapter-

I think this chapter shows just how much all these people care about one person-Rebecka. also, how much one person can bring so many people together-how all the people in this story seem to have one thing in common: loving Rebecka-and I think it seems to bring them together.

it's hard for me to explain exactly why I love your story so much, but believe me, I do. maybe because dying isn't something people really think about, it normally seems to be something people are normally afraid of, I think this is a new outlook on the idea of death, and for that matter, life. because I guess that when people are dying, they think differently-and I think this is shown in this story. for example, the list of things for Rebecka should do before she dies.

so to comment on the things in the note at the bottom, I really liked the format-I didn't think it was confusing, I thought it was nice because it was simply what everyone said to Rebecka, it turned whoever was reading it into Rebecka- see, you didn't put any description of anything in it, so it would be like being the one in a coma who couldn't see anything... if that makes sense.

also, I like it when you reply to reviews, it seems to show that you care about reviews and actually seem to think about them...

and I think it's wonderful that you've been updating so quickly, because I love this story, and so I really want to know what will happen.

Good chapter!

I really wish that Becka didn't have to die. I want her and Jonah to get together!

I eagerly await your next chapter, hoping it will be a happy one again. )