Ha! What's he going to do to Goldie? And how is Becka going to explain to the police officers - man poor Bernie! He was in a state as well, hope he's alright. I truly was not expecting that ending haha, oh the drama :p

You break my heart you know that? I was expecting fri ploys fun involving spies and sneaking, stalking & other 's' words and instead I've got a craving for pumpkin bread and am feeling awful for Becka. The poor thing!

It must be so difficult... You really make me think. Thank you, as always.

Now I dislike Sean even more, guess I'm protective over Jonah. What's up with Becka's family anyway, if my daughter had months to live I'd want to spend as much time with her as possible! Gah!

She's so going to get caught stalking heh.

You made me want a goldfish... Or to go to a fair. Mmmm taffy. Anyway, Becka totally kicked ass which was sweet, I forget sometimes that she's terminal because she's so strong but then I never really forget. They ticked stuff off their bucket lists too, yay! I bet Bernie puts some mad stuff on.

Haha that was hysterical! It's great to see the three of them getting on together, Bernie will be good for Jonah later too. This chapter honestly had me laughing out loud, poor Becka just seems to contract embarrassing situations.

The next one's going to be fun too .

Haha it's only habit that's got me reviewing this because I want so desperately to read the next chapter, but a lot went on which I figured I might ramble about.

So Jonah does know and he took it well too, there might be emotional outbreaks later but still I'm proud of him! Her family are just meh, why was she uncomfortable with Sean? Maybe that's just her way but still, didn't sit right with me. Her sister & Mum need to get a clue!

Onto the next chapter anywho, I'm already grinning!

Urgh her family... Does Jonah know? Or suspect? Or was he simply using a figure of speech? Poor Becka anyways, having to deal with her family and her illness as well as fear over telling Jobah, she's so brave.

You've got my emotions in a mess, damn you for writing such an incredible story! ;)

Oh Jonah! I didn't expect that he was a suicide survivor and for Becka to have a seizure... They were having such a light romantic time too, can't anything just go all light and fluffy for them? :(

Fantabulous as always

My heart just melted. That was without a doubt the sweetest thing, man alive... She's going to tell him soon I bet and I'm really uncertain as to how it'll go, whether he'll be angry & horrified or more supportive... Guess I'll just have to keep reading & find out as always heh.

Jonah's gonna flip when he hears Becka's got a job at Blockbuster surely? Hopefully he and Bernie will be alright with each other in the end though, since Bernie's the first person bar staff etc. that she's really confided in and I think that's really good, that she's telling someone. Also he'll get how important Jonah is to her so he shouldn't (hopefully) do anything stupid like hit on her... Hopefully.

So what has she got? I bet loads of people though cancer, I know I did. Guess I'll find out soon... and also whether the masses decided to go in favour of you writing a chapter from Jonah's POV I know I would love read one or hell the whole book ha.

Thank you as always and as always onward.

Argh! How do you do it? How, in one chapter, do you have me glaring at my computer because I don't like Becka's Dad, fearful during her episode and then laughing by the end? I was actually laughing aloud too so thank you very much for that.

I have a feeling she's going to tell him soon, she must mustn't she? I don't know if I want to find out but then I do... Gah woman you've got my mind a jumble with your amazing writing. Is it really only Chapter 6? I'm selfishly pleased that the story's completed, that means I can just keep reading on into the early hours of the night and you can get spammed with nonsensical gushing reviews :D

Abby x

Hahahaha what a thing to ask your daughters boyfriend - I suppose that's what Jonah is, although they haven't really defined it like that but then they don't need to.

And she's out! YES! Can't wait to see how she does in the real world, I have a feeling it might be a bit more trial and tribulation than an easy ride but she'll come out of it alright with Jonah at her side.

Can't wait to see Jonah's reaction, onto the next chappy!

Craving Chinese now... Thanks for that ;)

Oh no, but when Jonah finds out he'll be heartbroken! I hate stating the obvious but just the thought... At least she'll get discharged I suppose, will she go to school? Or have to live with her family?

Can you call a book on the internet a 'page turner'? Well this is certainly that or whatever the alternative is.

Thanks and onto the next chapter, as always,

Abby x

I love how affectionate they are with each other from the very beginning, with the embraces and cuddles and light kisses. Also how thoughtful Jonah is...

Poor Becka as well, what she has to deal with must be indescribably tough and I have a feeling that's not the worst of it.

It's sad though because with the story being written in past tense I'm constantly reminded that Becka's dying. That last line, "this story was now ours." and just knowing that that may not last for 'forever' as the cliche goes... Really saddens but who knows what's coming up, hopefully some major twist heh, at least that's the optimist in me wants. I know for sure it'll be incredible however it goes, I am really in love with your style of writing so thank you very much for sharing this!

Jonah's making me swoon already and I can tell he'll be a good thing for Becka (obviously, you wouldn't have wrote him like this if he wasn't but anywho)- I really want to know more of her story now though! I'm horribly impatient I know, but why is she all alone? And why is Jonah in the psych ward?

Questions which will be answered in the oncoming chapters I'm sure :)

Abby x