Ok, again amazing. This is by far my favourite story.

I'm in love with Jonah, I am in love with a fictional character, it's Just Listen all over again :)

It was good to actually hear what Becka was feeling instead of what she was pretending to feel.

Great, please never give this story up!

he, welcome back :) it was a good chapter, no wait, it IS a goodchapter, Jonah's fear of goldfish should not go as far as killing the zombie fish! but it was funny. The rest of the chapter was a little sad, but it all added up to chapter 15 lol. I think I'll wait till the end to submit to the theme song contest. Though I think I have a good song, I'm not telling! :) Update soon!

- Christina

this chapter and the whole story is AMAZING! i love it! so u need to write more asap! ok? i need to find out whats wrong with becka!

Dramatic ending... i wishs she was a balloon too... :(

Aw

I love how you wrote this is so bittersweet!

I've been upset because I have a bunch of reviews that I can't reply to and it's annoying!

It's weird though because when I'm listening to music, I've seen Chasing Cars as a related video and have never seen it, now I have reason to ]

I hope you get an update really soon because I can't wait!

-Grace

:D You're BACK! I missed you :)

Aw, this is so sad! But I love it- I really do. I liked how you focused on what she was thinking about dying, and how afraid she really was. And the balloon metaphor? I love it. Especially in the end, with the "tick tick tick"'s. That was pretty amazing :)

Anyway, I'm really looking forward to reading more! Update soon, please!

That was absolutely heartwrenching! Don't change it at all, though-it's perfect this way. I've been waiting so long for the update, and this is a great one. It fits.

I loved how you described Jonah's smell: it kind of lightened the mood for a second and was very funny.

Chasing Cars is a totally appropriate song for this chapter. When I saw that that was the song you chose, I started singing it in my head, and it was easy to imagine the chapter along with it.

Awesome! Please update soon again!

Woah! EPIC chapter here! XD

Haha, I love Bernie and Jonah. They're so different, but I could see them as friends :)

Lol, she peed on his foot? Nice! XD I could just see that happening! And the fear of Goldie Locks? Priceless :)

I love this story. It's so original and witty. You're doing a pretty fantastic job with it :) I can't believe we have to wait till August 10th! But... I think it'll be worth it :). Have an awesome time at wherever you're going away to!

-Autumn

I like the part about the Goldfish. XD This is not a bad chapter at all. Hope you'll have a good trip! :D

Correction:

"Without a second thought, I stomped on the guys foot, wheeled around, and kneed him in the gut." guy's.

You think THAT's a long author's note? Oh deary, you honestly have not SEEN the author's notes I've written XD

I read it! Well...this chapter anyways... And it did not disappoint ;) For whatever reason Bernie kind of reminds me of you. I can so see you doing just about everything he did. Or me...on a sugar high *shrugs* But mostly you. Especially this line: "I wasn't sure what to think of him on caffeine. To be honest, it was slightly frightening."

XD Well, it was a fun chapter! I would read the rest of it but...I don't like sad depressing things. Maybe next time you start a new story I'll be able to bring myself to read it from the beginning, but until then, my attention span wains for the longer stuff XP It's me not you, don't worry.

Good luck to you! Bye!

Long is good. I love Jonah beck's cutness.. needs more.. and the whole creepy bordwak guy and bernies grr laugh i loved it

Hey!

Your story is soo good! Have fun on holiday and update as soon as u can!

I am going to update soon 2!

From

Joy

I lovee this story ! GAHH I can't wait until you update again ! :]]

yay another chapter!

I think this is a great chapter, the writing and ideas included :) Hav fun on your holiday and update as soon as u get back!

dude and dudette-love that term!

And the zombie fish was awesome.

hahahahaha!

sehya, Kayla!

*hugs*

Mary