did i review the first chapter? idk. but...

hi... me again...

one of the people who thought you were dead or that something happened to you

im really paranoid...

AND OMG IM WORRIED AGAIN! D:

haha

please please give me a sign you're fine!

xoxo

Ps. best. story. EVARR!

Hi Kayla,

I wanted to tell you that I find your story amazing.

Here I am, up at four, no five in the morning crying big salty tears for Becka.

I'm the reader who loves happy endings and I can't think of a more deserving couple to have one.

Still, it really depends on our definition of happy, doesn't it? I'll be glad if Becka can leave with a peaceful mind and all those who love her will remember her dearly. Cause that's how much you've made me love your characters. :)

I also wanted to mention that in the scene with not-so-harry, lawrence, bernie and of course becka, i believe you mean to use 'waiver', not waver. I hope you don't mind me mentioning it, but if I were to write such a beautiful story, I wouldn't want a typo to interfere. I hate those words where spellcheck can't tell the difference between right and wrong. :P I usually bug my friends to check it through.

I think you're amazingly talented and I can't wait to read more.

Everything you write feels chillingly real and... poignant(? (I don't know if that's te write word.))

I hope I've cheered you on :S, because you certainly have deserved that after giving me hours of occupation and taking me on a journey.

With regards,

Lena

AGKLASKJGJDKASG. NOO. MARRY HIM.

Gah.

But I see her point of view... and his.

I was listening to Live Like We're Dying by Kris Allen and then it hit me. BAM, this song is pretty good for this story. Seriously.

I love the song. And this chapter. And every other chapter. Even the ones that I haven't read yet.

Yeah. :D

ForeverInfinity

I love the stuff at the top. It's amazing. Deep and whatnot.

Maybe crushing that guy's nose was pretty harsh, but you know, he deserved it. :D

Overall, I loved it.

ForeverInfinity

...She's going to die?

I swear, I almost cried.

:)

ForeverInfinity

I love this, I love this, I love this.

It's amazing. Truly.

I'm not sure what else to say...

So yeah.

Bye!

ForeverInfinity

I love how this story is both sad and fun to read...if that's even possible. Can't wait to see what happens next!

wow. just. wow.

keep going keep going lmao!

i love this storu, dwpressing but makes me feel strong for staying alive you know?

Hey I've been reading your story for a while and it's very good! I really liked this chapter, very funny:)...Great job!

So, I'm not sure if this story is finished yet or not. I could always go check if it says completed, but oh well, I want to share this anyway:) I was just listening to my IPod and "Leave Out All the Rest" by Linkin Park came on and I thought of your story:) One of my fav things to do is make playlists to stories I like, including my own lol, and I remembered that you were having that contest. Don't really mind if I win or not, or if it's already over, I just wanted you to know, I love the song and think it's super appropriate:) k, that's all ahha

Ema

Why are your characters always licking their lips? lol

Love the story:) It's very cute so far, can't wait to keep reading and see where you take it.

Ema

I absolutely love the theme and the plot of your story. It does seem to be going a little fast right now, so I guess I'll have to keep reading!

I don't think it's going too fast at all! Oh, Jonah. I'm so intrigued. I really want to know what they have!