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Interesting stanza. It really broke the stride of the first stanza, but oddly in a good way. It was so simple that it made me stop and think.

[you wear me well.] Such a powerful ending. It implies so much with so little.

Beautiful piece. I love the thoughts your words can evoke.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

Beautiful! I love the title, every line, every word you choose. This was a wonderful write.

I would love opinions from a writer like you on my work. It would mean a lot to me.

I like how you catalogue young and foolish with so much depth - talking about silk stockings is effeminate, yet also masculine at the same time, wearing heels one inch too high is the vain attempt to rule and control everything. Another way of thinking that someone knows everything about the world, even though they do not. Wonderful work, keep it up.

Much love,
Juliet.